Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Thesis Statement

Martin Luther and Emperor Kangxi both criticize other religions through government.  Martin Luther criticizes that Christians that combine their faith with government while Emperor Kangxi criticizes the Catholic faith.

2 comments:

  1. very straight forward, but good good. I would improve this by taking a "that" out, either before or after "Christians" because it sounds like you are going to say something more when you have both of them there.

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  2. Love the upfront tone. I know what your papers about. Cool cool.

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